We read the story 'Going to the Doctor' and discussed the importance of describing characters in our writing so the audience has a clear picture of who they are.
Take a read.
It was orange with stripes.
It is a boy cat.
He has a black nose with a tissue.
By Kaleb
It's orange with a green nose.
It is a boy and he has black and white paws.
By Mele-Jael
He has orange fur.
He has a cold and he is going to the doctor to fix his cold.
By Patrick
He has orange fur.
He has a tissue in his hand.
He has a green nose.
By Skyla
Orange and ginger fur with a tissue in his hand and a black nose.
He has a cold.
By Heidi
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